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slides.rst

@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@ Braids - Intro to Git
 
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-   Goal: introduce Git as an archiving practice (history, provenance, selection),
-   then do a playful branch-based website exercise published live.
+   Goal: introduce Git as an archiving practice,
+   then do a little branch-based website exercise published live.
 
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@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Agenda (90 min)
 ===============
 
 1. Context: what Git is, what it does, who uses it (10 min)
-2. Install + quick sanity check (10 min)
+2. Install Git (10 min)
 3. Core concepts + core commands (20 min)
 4. Forgejo: accounts + clone/push permissions (10 min)
 5. Exercise: branch a page, publish live, iterate (35 min)
@@ -519,8 +519,7 @@ Push rejected (main protected):
 
 Auth issues:
 
-- HTTPS: check username/token/password
-- SSH: check key added to Forgejo + `ssh -T`
+- HTTPS: check username/password
 
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@@ -531,7 +530,7 @@ Concept recap in archiving terms
 - log = inventory / chain of custody
 - diff = conservation report (what changed)
 - branch = parallel dossier
-- push = deposit to institutional archive (remote)
+- push = share publicly / deposit to institutional archive (remote)
 
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@@ -549,7 +548,6 @@ Better:
 - "Add animated gif and profile link"
 - "Change background and typography"
 - "Fix broken image path"
-- "Refactor layout: move link block above gif"
 
 Rule: message should still make sense in 6 months.
 
@@ -575,11 +573,10 @@ You should now be able to:
 - publish to a remote
 - read history and differences
 
-Next steps:
+Learn more:
 
-- merging via PRs (review workflow)
-- tags/releases (archival milestones)
-- basic collaboration patterns (feature branches)
+- `Learn Git Branching <https://learngitbranching.js.org/>`_ 
+- `Oh My Git <https://ohmygit.org/>`_
 
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